My favorite memory was when we had to walk 10 kilometers to Bau Sau, a crocodile Lake, and came back. We were very tired and angry because it we had to walk a very long way just to see some crocodiles. In fact, when we got there, there seemed to be no crocodiles who wanted to appear. It was a terrible moment, but it was very fun and I’ll always keep that in my memory.
Other moment that I remember most was when Zack and I, my roommate, had to walk to the restaurant to take some boiling water in order to cook our instant noodle. We were very afraid because we were scared of ghost, and….teachers. The curfew was 9:30 PM, but we were out to get some boil water at 10 PM, so we were afraid that teachers may caught us and wouldn’t let us eat, but luckily, we escape the teachers, cooked our noodle and had a good supper.
I think my grammar was alright, because it was all been checked by Mr.Michael. I don't repeat any words, except for memory, because that is what the topic is. I don't really have a conclusion so I think I need to improve by having a conclusion. I think my grade should be 6 or 7 over 12.
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